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Monday 28 January 2008

Winter Report -- by Zephirine

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A leaf of brown comes tumbling down,
gyratory in the grey January air.
Trees lift their cold hard shoulders up
against the white congested sky.
Berries gleam red and amber
among dull evergreen leaves.
Dog-walkers plod determinedly
the single lane to the park,
then filter out across the open space
avoiding heavy fast-moving Rottweilers,
staying stony-faced but once in a while
reducing speed to exchange quick greetings.
One coughs to a standstill, then
steers himself a bench to find his menthol sweets,
his dog obliviously accelerating away.
Small birds pass and re-pass
back and forth to fetch food,
signalling to each other with swift chirps,
but people, dogs, birds are running on empty:
a long hard road till spring.
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13 comments:

Anonymous said...

I hate but love this. It is a rembrance of winter parks in London. Very different from winter walks on the beach. But mostly it makes me think of Eliot and how I am dreading the cruellest month which is yet to come.
I guess that's a modified thanks to Zeph for a wonderful piece of writing.

Anonymous said...

Thanks Mimi. This was an experiment really, trying to import vocabulary from another subject (traffic) into a scene where you wouldn't expect it.

Anonymous said...

Good poem Zeph,

Can I spam slightly on behalf of a friend...whose entered a 60second movie in the Bafta's and needs lots of people to vote for it to make the shortlist. (you can only vote once).

Its a good film I think you might enjoy it? Is titled The Books.

http://www.60secondsoffame.co.uk/bafta/sixtysec/_entry/0000000016f808e601172b7e94db0690/jsps/entry

If people like it I can point you in the direction of some more of his work.
Thank you,

Anonymous said...

Thanks pastagobbler - what a huge number of aspiring film-makers! Hope your friend does well.

offsideintahiti said...

Hey, no-one told me this place was back in action. I thought it was, er... hibernating.

Thanks, Zeph, very refreshing. Exotic, even.

guitougoal said...

zeph,
I like your poem zeph, I got caught freezing in the middle of the traffic.

Anonymous said...

Glad you liked it, Offie and Guitou. The site was hibernating, but I was afraid it would pass seamlessly into a coma and die, like a pet tortoise. So I thought I should write something.

Anyone else? Any more whale stories?

offsideintahiti said...

The whales won't be back here until june or so. I could write something about waiting for the whales but that would be minimalist.

In the meantime, we have to make do with mangoes. They're easier to peel.

Zephirine said...

Easier to peel but very difficult to eat without getting covered in juice... perhaps best eaten on the beach? In a sort of beached-whale posture...

Zephirine said...

Forgot to say that the first line is a quote from a song, and should really be in " ".
Here's an interesting version of the song...

DoctorShoot said...

... in december in the rain...

oh dear the sun is out here today and the seabreeze is holding around 27 degrees celcius and the kids are at the beach...

the same people and the same dogs and birds only consuming the arc of summer as it passes toward the autumn sunset...

yes mangoes or papaya... too many bananas they are rotting on the verandah...

Zephy
you name the gentle breeze and yet the park holding it's breath for spring... hope we can send you some

Anonymous said...

Dunno what you sent, Doc, but we had an earthquake last night!

Only a little one.

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