for Billy Mills
Glamorous rambler
putting its show on
in cerise clusters
waving and nodding
over the archway
When you look closer
see how each branch is
dusted with powder
musty and cobwebbed
infected and grey
Dorothy Perkins
“martyr to mildew”
still it keeps coming
back every summer
doing its number
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So small at first the dark marks on the leaves
they passed unnoticed while the buds grew fat
and blooms emerged spreading their coloured silks
shining in the returned and welcome sun
Now as you bend to the familiar scent
confirming summer as you breathe it in
you see the spots have grown and turned to black
and the green shoots of spring are fading fast
Already a few yellowed leaves have curled
the blotch of blight on each draining its life
thin stems that once clung tight will lose their grip
and fall dying to the dry waiting soil
But still above them flames the flowering rose
seeming indifferent to the creeping rot
that from now on ensures its blazing pride
each year will dwindle and enfeebled fade.
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21 comments:
Apologies for the subject matter! This is a response to a bit of a challenge from Billy in the last thread :)
Well done, you rose to the challenge (oh blimey no pun intended)
I love the way the rose towers strongly above all the rotting flowers.
yes, such is life. Incidentally, Zeph, the other day I encountered your namesake Mlle. Drouhin. A most gorgeous shade of warm pink.
I was praising the Côtes du Rhône at Pinkerbell's, it's only fair I should mention switch to Bordeaux for Zeph's rather full-bodied effort.
And next year, I'll tackle syntax.
Where's me flipflops?
Munni, Zephirine Drouhin is in fact somewhat prone to mildew, but otherwise a fine rose :)
Santé, Offie!
Zeph,
nice and smells good mlle Guerlain.
"prone to mildew" chances are if you plant the climbing roses against a wall they are prone to mildew because they need a good air circulation-dixit my grand mother Mamanlautre-
he meant "smells good like mlle chanelle....."
Guitou, your grandmama was absolutely right.
Guerlain, Chanel, either is fine...
I wear Guerlain Shalimar but it doesn't smell like roses lol.
Shall he mar her scent with perfume?
What a lovely poem. Who could have thought that the subject matter could be captured with such beauty? I particularly like the metaphor of coloured silks.
Also how grand that this site is now giving good gardening tips.
Next stop, food!
I could probably write a poem about cake Mimi... it's my favourite topic!
Well, Pinkerbell, don't just sit there, bake us a poem. Please.
Good gardening tips, yes - Offie's Bordeaux Mixture is a fine traditional remedy. Much more of this and I'll have to start a gardening blog...
Shall we have a Poems About Cake challenge?
I love cakes,please go for a Chocolate cake challenge i'll be the judge, you bake them and I taste them.
Probably Mimi will come up with a wonderful fluffy chocolate cake ( all you need mimi it's a box of chocolate mix and mayonnaise)-poor Amaretto or Grand Marnier on it, Finally top it with a Pink ornementation with an inscription,or a poem from
Pinkerbell on it-Something theatrical.
I need a drink.
Sounds like you've already had one...
Stuff the poems, let's have a cake challenge.
mmm la pourriture ignoble, very nice Zephirine but I'm worried about the association, you may want to douse yourself in chlorine
Gateauxgoal, salivating at very the thought (torte?) of Raspberry Pavlova
Coincidentally I just received a fine recipe for chocolate brownies. No mayonnaise involved!
Great stuff, zeph.
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