photo by James W Young from www.spaceweather.com
SummerBruised dark purple skyThreatening violenceFlashes dark across the cloudsLightning fuels bruisesReel against the violenceOf the weatherRain hurls itselfAgainst the window
No way outGutters weep, cry and echoInside
Blows and tears leave me weak
Crying for my past
9 comments:
"Gutters weep, cry and echo"
That's very very good, I think, Mimi.
It's very vivid, Mimi. I would say very striking, but that might sound like a bad pun on 'lightning'!
bad pun on lightning:thanks a million watts for taking the pressure of me Zeph.
Mimi, I found it Very Rimbaud* with a Lightening Storm picture creating dramatic visual poetry.
* "Descente en Enfer"
Well, gui, you can disguise hell in French, but we all know about the descent.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=b4lHWn7t_y0
Make it a double.
Damn right, mimi, the weather has taken a turn for the worst down here too.
I especially like the bruises and the gutters. Very good, and a bit disconcerting as I've got the windows wide open, and here it only just got really summery.
Strongly expressed, and a bit uncomfortable.
I expect the forecast was sun and light showers.
NCE -> CDG -> LAX -> PPT
Hope we don't get too many storms.
See ya.
So kind of you all to comment. It was Zeph's picture.
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