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Sunday, 24 June 2007

Sea Areas -- by Zephirine

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Plymouth, Portland, Wight, Dover:
a south coast child, I lie awake listening to the wind howl
as forecast.
New bungalows are built behind the sea wall, where no-one ever builds,
and then the sea
- south westerly severe gale force 9 gusting to storm force 10, visibility poor -
picks up the shingle beach
and throws it
at the little houses
and later in the calm we go to look
- light to moderate, south easterly veering south, visibility good -
at dolls’ house bungalows, their front walls broken down, the open rooms
with lightshades
hanging
and the furniture still there under the shingle.

Bleak names, Fisher, German Bight, Iceland
Lowlands, Lowlands away my John
Bailey, Faeroes
cruel north
Viking and Cromarty

Forties, Dogger, Humber, Thames:
nineteen fifty-three, two thousand lives lost: a spring tide
and wild winds
- storm force 11, north-westerly backing north, visibility moderate -
form a storm surge far in the north that thrusts down through the whole North Sea
a tsunami with no earthquake,
and the water
driving south
to where there is no storm, sweeps over and sweeps away
the lowland villages and homes
- Severe weather warning: too late -
a boy of ten gets off the bus, back from shopping, and his house has gone
his family inside…

Shanty names, Trafalgar, Biscay
There we lay till next day in the bay of Biscay oh
Shannon, Rockall
wild Atlantic
Malin and the Hebrides

Sole, Fastnet, Lundy, Irish Sea:
long ago
the crushed Armada limping northwards round Ireland into the open ocean,
- storm force 10, north-westerly, visibility poor -
is wrecked
along the coast
from Antrim to Kerry.
Not knowing his longitude, the admirably named Sir Cloudesley Shovell
gets lost,
and loses
the finest ships of the English fleet on the dragons’ teeth of Scilly
- gale force 8 gusting force 9, westerly, visibility: fog.
and the sea
before and since has taken vessels of all sizes, galleons, yachts, trawlers,
sailors, fishermen, travellers, captains
smashed
on rocks
or driven onto sandbanks,
coughing their last lungs full of brine and weed
The salt seaweed was in his hair, my Lowlands away

Round these small islands a monster roams
strong beyond belief
hardly restrained by walls and levees
never captive
letting us play when in placid mood
- southerly, light, visibility good -
never tame
strengthened yet further by the warming globe.
Imminent.
We need to know what it’s doing
at all times.

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22 comments:

DoctorShoot said...

fantastic Zeph...
had me reaching for the beanie and scarf as I read it...
big canvas in a small poem... really really enjoyed it...

this brings the guts and human frailty of it alive, and infuses the reality of the shipping news with the calamities and real life dramas that sweep in and out of history on the tide of it's subject matter.

great play with names and seasons and characters...

sorry but you and mimi have taken the shipping news by storm...

great stuff great stuff... a whole new dimension to the salon... malts all round I say...

Anonymous said...

Thanks Doc! Here's a visual aid:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tfEo6E6nElE

Anonymous said...

Very musical, Zeph. Great stuff.

I am a south coast child too, from a different coast, further south. Where the sky is near always blue and the sea - "mer belle à peu agitée" - would have you believe it's only a lake (only to trick you better when you're finally convinced). But still, I'd listen, just before the 8 pm news on France Inter, to the shipping forecast telling of places where stepping on a ship was a dangerous adventure and not a promenade with sunscreen and goodies in the ice-box.

I did eventually visit some of these areas much later, during numerous crossings on Irish Ferries (Wight, Portland, Plymouth, Lundy, Irish Sea). The most memorable one was on the 2nd of january 199?, last crossing of the season between Le Havre and Rosslare. When you walk through the gangways and you see little stacks of paper bags, neatly arranged at small intervals for easy reach... We made for our cabin immediately, hoping the horizontal position would stabilise our stomachs.

The ship started moving, and after just a few minutes... BAM! We hit something. We'd only just left, so I figured we must have hit the jetty or an incoming ship. I sat up, trying to think fast. There'll be a siren in a minute, what essentials should I take with me? BAM! We hit something else. Still no siren, no announcement on the P.A. system... BAM!... BAM!

Waves.

For 24 hours. Never been happier to see the green fields of Ireland. Thanks for the memories, Zeph.

Anonymous said...

It's the BAM...sickening plunge.... BAM...sickening plunge... that does it :)

The guy who posted that youtube clip coolly says 'it's not scary but it is rather exhausting'. Rather you than me, mate.

Though from the shore I like to see some nice waves, myself. The Med doesn't have quite enough of them.

file said...

this is great Zeph, so thoughtful and compiled with such art

there are a definite ocean rhythms but, to me, the essay would have to be about the use of the sibilant salty S's in your verses

you've captured the intimate and the ultimate in detail, it's not light reading, but you isolate the drama so well, really like it Z

the last 3 lines absolutely nail a perspective of the SF and Sea Areas

'Imminent.
We need to know what it’s doing
at all times.'

again, would be great as an audio/video potes reading...

DoctorShoot said...

agreed file and I have an idea:

Mimi and Zeph in a small boat with gulls and waves crackling in the background and reading these two works...
it is women's theatre...
and some poor suffering male who failed to properly listen to the shipping news up to his waist in crashing waves and half lit breakers clutching a video camera and trying to get the sound levels right while the girls giggle and enjoy their deliveries, but serious when it counts...
ah but that is sylvia and virginia and ....

Anonymous said...

Immensely musical and moving. I can imagine it sung to a Britten setting, performed on a stormy night at the concert hall in Snape with a sublime boy soprano singing the italics.

Anonymous said...

Ooh, yes please Mimi.. oh damn, he died.

file said...

btw,

has anyone else picked up on 'a south coast child' and 'the women of the north'?

why do girls always do their homework together?

Anonymous said...

Please sir, Mimi wrote hers first sir, it was unconscious plagiarism.

file said...
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file said...

oh I just got it - Sea Aria's, songs of the sea?

file said...

that's nice Zeph

Zephirine said...
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Anonymous said...

I have really enjoyed reading this poem and mimi's too.

I have never really got into the whole shipping forecast thing. I'm too aurally flighty for that. But these poems truly invoked the incessant drama of the seas off western Europe.

I can't ever see me living away from the coast again.

I was in the Atlantic last week in France. It was so thrilling to be thrown around so disdainfully.

Zephirine said...

Thanks BD, nice to see you here. I used to be the same about living away from the sea, somehow London has fooled me with its maritime history and occasional seagulls, and I believe it to be much nearer the sea than it is....

Anonymous said...

I'm mystified now to know what these deleted comments are, and there's one on my SF too. But to reassure you, file, Zeph and I did not huddle together to do our homework. We write, as always, independently, but a challenge was thrown down for the SF.I'm sure that if Zeph and I had been able to share homework, I'd have ended up with far better results than I did in my A levels!

file said...

sorry mimi, it was I, being fripperant in the wrong places as always

just joking about girls doing homework together of course, but, it is interesting how you both feature those GPS anchors in your poems and that they should complement so well like fitting a yin yang ball together

Anonymous said...

File: fripperant is fine. i take no hurt. Imagine if Zeph and I get together - our poetry will rock the pages or sofas of the Salon!

guitougoal said...

beautiful zeph1

guitougoal said...

Zeph,
one more time: beyoutiful.

Anonymous said...

Thanks Guitou.