Guardian.co.uk (remember them?) now have a poetry blog where you can post your own pomes on a different subject each week. Needless to say File and Zeph have been prowling about there, and File wrote this one for the 'scenic spots' topic:
The Road to Pai
“Follow that scent!” you say
To the tuk-tuk pilot
In the day-glo jacket.
He smiles, soi
Disperse wildly
In every direction.
It’s the perfume of his birth, of breakfast
Of klong and death
It’s inside his sun-washed,
Knocked-off Diesel t-shirt
The ink under his skin
And long days working
In traffic
You decide on
A private eye,
Renting a Yamaha 125
For yourself. You set off,
Out of the city, into the mountains, climbing
Spiral roads by spirit houses’
Painted eaves and gold leaf like gold teeth
In the dark mouths of jungles. Here
Lie homes for ghosts, secret
Agents of other worlds, instinctively you know
Interrogating saffron
Won’t help.
Still pursuing hues
Looking down now on rice paddies,
The shade of verdant that is liquid emerald
Eddies in the shimmering late afternoon
Stream. Freewheeling
Past warnings of landmines
And signs to hot springs, sources
And waterfalls, informants
Furtive whisperings
At the hidden ends of dirt tracks
Off the main road that
Traces the valley to Pai.
The Shan fingerprint below
Twists into focus
The wooden ridges, shaded whorls
That once sheltered horses
Now keeps vinyl seats of trail bikes
Out of the heat of the day.
Finding chicken curry and noodles,
Cold Beer Chang and harsh menthol cigarettes
Called Falling Rain or
‘Saifon’ in the local sing-song
Which dips and soars; smoke kites on
Fickle thermals over the two-stroke
Spiked beats of mopeds
Laden with durian or jackfruit or corn
Or laughing children
On their way home from school
Looking right back at you
They say: “We’re all detective,
We are all clues”
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14 comments:
That's much too long for haiku, the scansion is all wrong and it doesn't even rhyme.
Frankly, I expect better from Other Stiff.
Is winter in paradise making you a little grumpy, Monsieur Side?
Grumpy, moi? Jamais. It's just a façade 'coz I'm too shy to tell Filou how much I like his stuff.
don't be shy O, you're quite right; it's a truly terrible haiku
One of the worst I've ever read, in fact.
Pai's an old little village not far from Mai Hong Son, I think you might have been quite near there Offie non?
File is trying very hard to make my Haikus to look good and done by the rules-thanks amigo.Never been to Pai but I like the name-
Chapeau filou, chapeau de paille of course!
I do my best to help G, chapeau de paille de Pere TanGuy?
It's lovely, File, and now I know what soi are 'cos I looked them up.
Did you get to Pai and was it interesting? Or was it one of those 'to travel hopefully is better than to arrive' occasions?
thanks Zeph, Pai was simply beautiful and beautifully simple! Completely unreconstructed in those days though I hear it's got a bit of bad rep now for ne'r do wells and dodgy cops.
there's not a bad description here
http://wikitravel.org/en/Pai
but it's sort of been discovered now, a shame as it had an air of Shangri La which contrasted to the hill top Camalot-in-the-mists of Mae Hong Son just up the road
this is modern times of those who did the railway.
Or maybe I'm being far too flip about your poem.
I'll sleep on it.
Flip, possibly. Incomprehensible, certainly:)
:)))
...'n anyway what's wrong with flip?
Another Flip for Dominick? Or the Flipside of Dominick Hyde?
Good flips. All round.
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