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Monday 15 October 2007

i-ku by Guitougoal's pet


23 comments:

Zephirine said...

Chapeau, Guitou! It's beautiful.

file said...

bof, M.Tougoal is not just a pretty face huh? excellent!

offsideintahiti said...

Le chat d'Guitou r'garde
la lune. PrĂȘte-moi ta plume,
j'te f'rai un haiku.

guitougoal said...

Zeph.,
my pet is sending you a tank youpostcard.
Filou, Offy,
he could become a little mad spider running around your neck if you make fun of him.

Anonymous said...

Monday, aiku day
Heavy rain in my garden
Mould between my toes

Unknown said...

guitou:
this is neither a haiku, nor a my ku, nor an i ku
but enjoy on your day:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DBbZ9V2zsT0&mode=related&search=

Anonymous said...

Just as I was about to call it a night - feeling another year older - Marcela produces a gem of enjoyment.

Thank you.

guitougoal said...

offside and mrsoffside;
La luna over Moorea
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9TYtl3mrpU0

file said...

welcome Mr.Soffside, great to see you here and what an entrance, thanks for sharing the mold, really

now you've shown your talents tho there will be loud and urgent demands for more, be warned

Pere Guitou, that Marcela may have a point you know, but that's ok if you can teach me how to do those things you do with the moon...ah la lune, tu chante, je danse...

Anonymous said...

File, you are welcome
Just met you and already
Make me wet my pants

Zephirine said...

What a romantic thread going on here... welcome, Mme O! Nice haiku, shame about the mould:)

offsideintahiti said...

That's my girl, pure class.
Wet pants, mouldy toes and she
writes a mean haiku.

Zephirine said...

Did I say romantic? :o)

file said...

blimey mrsoffie, I hope you don't get mould there too, the dangers of the tropics down under eh?

salright, I've got me coat

tony said...

I love it Guitou, though like myself you'e miscounted your syllables. You could drop the articles if you like.

I'll get my coat now,
nobody likes a pedant -
except accountants.

Anonymous said...

Make sure it's a rain
Coat you're wearing over there
Mould is everywhere

tony said...

Wellington Boots too;
to make sure the nasty mould
meets its waterloo.

Zephirine said...

Duh, didn't notice the syllables. Still, Guitou's pet can write poetry, do we need it to be able to count as well?

henrymoon said...

fine haiku, gtg!

guitougoal said...

Tony,
i-ku by a poet pet
la bĂȘte n'est pas si bete
mais ne compte pas jusqu'a sept.

guitougoal said...

Zeph,
thanks, at least I got the best on my side.
(to be honest, I never heard of an -I-ku before, same for my pet who has more i-q)

file said...

there once was an offsid-ette
who pining for lack of a pet
and not liking roses
she cultured her toeses
a fungal faux-pas she'll regret (surely)

And Show Pony Tony resuscitates Boni
And wears his Wellies too
When he should be telling of the fearful spelling
Of Flory at Waterlieu
(evidently)

'J'i-ku' Emule Zola

Anonymous said...

We love pet i-kus
We can't count to number seven
Fur cats read your words