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Friday 19 October 2007

i-ku by Tonyellis


10 comments:

Anonymous said...

I like this a lot. Lovely picture, and living on the coast, I too am bound by tide times.

Zephirine said...

The syllabic tide rules but you can still surf the inspiration, eh? Clever stuff, T.

tony said...

Thanks ladies, but you were right zeph - there's no I. Problem was that it came to me during a comment and without thinking I sent it off for filing.

accountant hangs head:
counting syllables is fine
but an audt needs i

Zephirine said...

Well, you have a 'me'... it's near enough:)

guitougoal said...

Tony,
Waterworld indeed.It's beautiful. I am swimsuited and ready to dive,

Anonymous said...

I typed my name and
then forgot what I wanted
to say. Nevermind.

tony said...

Hmmm now why did I come into the kitchen?

Anonymous said...

I believe you were
looking for your glasses which
are in the ice-box.

file said...

...are there footprints in the butter?

nice one Tony, imo your best yet

offsideintahiti said...

Hoofprints in the butler? Ouch.