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Wednesday, 17 October 2007

i-ku by Guitougoal's pet




14 comments:

offsideintahiti said...

666

The number of Guitou's pet.

Anonymous said...

Hey, Vade retro
Why don't you play by the rules
Want an abacus?

Zephirine said...

I've given up trying to get Guitou's pet to count... but it's a lovely pome.

offsideintahiti said...

Agreed Zeph, it's a great feeling, neatly expressed. In fact I admire Guitou's lizard for completely disregarding that silly syllables rule.

Lovely i-queue.

Anonymous said...

Guitou, don't hate me
My comment so easily
came, could not help it

I do like it too
It reminds me of my teens
Midday was the least

offsideintahiti said...

She's beginning to talk like that at home too. Help!

tony said...

Counting syllables?
No lapdog guitougoal's pet;
i-ku wild pony

file said...

the only problem I can see with holding summer is that it so quickly changes to a mulchy autumn and then a cold dark barren winter...and death, but perhaps I should live in the moment like Pere G.

Anonymous said...

My three like Guitou's pet a lot and say:

Winter mornings here
We need much more fur, quickly
Hard to count to five

With only four toes.

guitougoal said...

Vade Retro abacus is my Tahitian name,
I am évadé retro.

Anonymous said...

Sorry all, I can't count and write poetry at the same time. May be we should call it a dog-ku?
Let's hope my master doesn't post a gui-ku.

Anonymous said...

My three say: if you have a dog-ku, we want a cat-ku.

Anonymous said...

Miaouu......ku.

Anonymous said...

Fierce would go quietly if Offy sends some FISH for Satan's daughter.

But the little evil one wants to meet Guitou's pet. She thinks she'll win.